NaNo Wrap-up – It Didn’t Go As Planned – NSFW Excerpt

It is twenty to midnight, 30th November, and for me NaNo is over. Actually, NaNo was over for me last Monday when I fell and dislocated my shoulder, but I have been trying to work on both of my books as best as I can with a bung arm in the last week.

The bad news – I didn’t hit my 150,000 goal, and neither one of my books are quite finished yet.

The good news, and this is what I am focusing on.

  • Copping A Lot Of Sin just has the Epilogue left to write, which I will do tomorrow.
  • The Power Of The Bite is over 65,000 words and four scenes short of being finished. It will be finished this week.
  • In total, despite having five days off in the last seven because of my bad arm I managed 139,569 words for the month – that deserves a happy dance, but someone else would have to do it for me 🙂

So I am happy – sore, but happy and I am pleased with the way both stories panned out. I met new friends on NaNo including a delightful woman who apparently only lives about an hour from my place and who thinks it’s a hoot that I write M/M (she’s over 60). You, my lovely readers, have been so supportive and so encouraging throughout, which means the world to me. And really, to me, it is all of you that makes writing my stories so much fun. I might not have hit my 30 day badge for NaNo, even though I did technically “win” it, but that will give me  something to work towards next year. In the meantime, in the spirit of sharing, here’s an excerpt from Copping A Lot Of Sin – oh, what the heck, I’m celebrating, let’s make it a NSFW excerpt.

THANK YOU 🙂

Copping A Lot Of Sin – Excerpt (NSFW) – unedited

Panting heavily Gabriel dropped down on his arms, resting his head on the mattress, Ben prone over his back. “I think you broke me,” he mumbled, his head still spinning with the intensity of his orgasm.

“You haven’t forgotten me have you,” Sin asked with a droll smile. “I seem to be the only one hard and left hanging.”

“As if I’d let that happen,” Ben said with a laugh, sitting back up. Gabriel felt Ben’s cock slip from his body and, my Gods, Sin wasn’t the only one still hard. Ben bounced off the bed and disappeared into the bathroom.

“He’s still hard, and yet his spunk is dripping out of my ass,” Gabriel whispered to Sin feeling his eyes closed. He was ready for a quick nap.

Sin just shrugged. “He’s a wolf shifter,” he said, as though that explained everything. Moments later, Ben was back, and Gabriel felt a soft cloth clean him up. Sin’s arm came around his shoulder, pulling him over to his broad chest that looked like the perfect pillow. Gabriel relaxed into the embrace and closed his eyes.

“You okay like that?” He heard Ben ask and presumed the wolf was talking to Sin.

“Just perfect baby. Come show me what you’ve got.”

Gabriel was jostled slightly and he cracked his eyes open slightly to see Sin grabbing one of his legs, and pulling it up to his chest. Seems his mate was not only big, he was surprisingly limber too. Another jostle – aha, pillows under Sin’s hips – good idea. Some rustles of covers, Ben getting into position probably, and then a long heartfelt moan from Sin that Gabriel felt deep in his soul. As Gabriel loved the feeling of being filled, he could imagine how good Sin was feeling.

The gentle rocking of Sin’s body lulled Gabriel closer to sleep when he felt a soft hand in his hair – a big hand. Damn, how was Sin doing that? Now he had to open his eyes and see. Cracking his eyelids open just a bit, Gabriel saw that Ben had Sin’s legs over his shoulder, moving with a lithesome grace, his long blond hair falling around his shoulders like a halo. Then something else caught his eye – Sin’s cock, hard, leaking and totally unattended. That just would not do.

Gabriel wriggled his head down unwilling to leave Sin’s embrace, or the hard muscles under his cheeks. The hand in his hair stilled, then pushed slightly as Sin gripped more tightly. Great minds think alike. Nudging forward that extra inch needed, Gabriel opened his mouth letting the hard length nudge inside. He wasn’t sure if he had the energy to give a full blown blow job, but he suckled as hard as he could, letting Sin’s hips move his shaft in and out of his mouth.

Sin groaned, Ben groaned and Gabriel could see the little wolf was putting his speed on. Sin’s cock was nudging the back of his throat with every push, and Gabriel relaxed, letting the man fuck his face in time to Ben’s thrusts. Gabriel thought he would lend a hand to the situation, and gently cupped Sin’s balls, rolling them around in his fingers. Sin stuttered, and then shouted and his release poured down Gabriel’s throat, and from the roar Ben gave, Gabriel could only assume that his little wolf had found his second release of the evening. Perfect. Two for all three of them, and this time no hurt Ben to upset the afterglow. Now if the guys would just stop moving, he could get some sleep. He was still lightly sucking the head of Sin’s softening cock, as he felt the darkness cover him like a blanket.

Copping A Lot Of Sin – coming soon.

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10 responses to NaNo Wrap-up – It Didn’t Go As Planned – NSFW Excerpt


  1. Aly

    Sorry about your shoulder hope it feels better soon . Both your books sound great hope you finish them soon keep up the good work 😀

  2. Heather Leonard

    Hi Lisa! Almost 140,000 is impressive any way you look at it. Well done! Hope you are feeling better, and back to 100% soon. I’m definitely looking forward to the new books, but whether they come out next month or a year from now isn’t as important as you being healthy.

  3. Caligirl

    Aw hon, I hope your shoulder is okay, when do you go to the doctor’s? I for one can wait as long as it takes for your shoulder to heal right properly. Take your time. YOU need YOU healthy.

    P.S. I started breathing hard reading this excerpt!!

  4. Laurie P

    Great excerpt, loved it. Can’t wait to read this story.

  5. Lisao79

    Thank you all, sorry for the delay in replying, I crashed in bed as soon as I hit the publish post button 🙂
    @ Caligirl – not until Friday, doc services around here suck, but that’s okay – plenty of over the counter medications to keep me going till then 🙂

    Hugs to you all
    Lisa

  6. Caligirl

    And what is the difference between a plain excerpt and an NSFW excerpt?

  7. Leona Bowman

    That is a hot sneak peek. But don’t over do your arm, we can wait..